tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-583544120956527475.post826728516130784379..comments2024-02-15T11:05:15.579-06:00Comments on Apathetic Lemming of the North: Japan: Missed Inspections, Two Colors of Smoke at Fukushima; Years of Rebuilding AheadBrian H. Gillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13209697542675181894noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-583544120956527475.post-19351269100111576492011-03-22T20:31:56.092-05:002011-03-22T20:31:56.092-05:00Brigid,
Right you are. I re-formed the sentence w...Brigid,<br /><br />Right you are. I re-formed the sentence while I was at it.<br /><br />And I think I've spotted your first 'odd comma' comment. Thanks!Brian H. Gillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13209697542675181894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-583544120956527475.post-92195165682243170882011-03-21T22:02:10.737-05:002011-03-21T22:02:10.737-05:00There's another oddly placed comma: "spen...There's another oddly placed comma: "spending years, putting their homes and lives back together."<br /><br />I say another because I mentioned one in a post from a different blog.<br /><br />The Friendly Neighborhood ProofreaderBrigidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03796317915330760325noreply@blogger.com